tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3320437584368456903.post2824313806636303482..comments2023-10-06T07:09:36.335-07:00Comments on The ND's nigh...: MonkeylandsND Mitchellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16510971525209549921noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3320437584368456903.post-43446320844390499252013-03-06T19:22:54.134-08:002013-03-06T19:22:54.134-08:00Great writing David! Congrats on the award, well-...Great writing David! Congrats on the award, well-deserved indeed. :-)Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3320437584368456903.post-21027592143247660812013-03-05T18:51:14.413-08:002013-03-05T18:51:14.413-08:00Wow David, I was walking and hold my breath for th...Wow David, I was walking and hold my breath for the revelation ~<br /><br />The ending was suspenseful and you have a knack for drawing up the characters very well ~ <br /><br />Really enjoyed this and not surprised by its recognition ~ But you have to tell us what happens afterwards ~<br /><br />Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3320437584368456903.post-73343936314880986822013-03-04T19:12:40.808-08:002013-03-04T19:12:40.808-08:00dang man this is really good...i can see why it wa...dang man this is really good...i can see why it was chosen to be honored in that way...really a gripping read...and thoroughly enjoyed....about 4 paragraphs from the end as you describe the car coming up the road....dang man...you had me good...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3320437584368456903.post-82196842985792751462012-02-16T12:34:53.794-08:002012-02-16T12:34:53.794-08:00Philip,
Thanks a lot for your kind words. It...Philip,<br /> Thanks a lot for your kind words. It's much appreciated that you took the time to read the story and makes the whole process of writing it worthwhile. Cheers for now,<br />DavidND Mitchellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16510971525209549921noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3320437584368456903.post-18683643769870187152012-02-16T01:43:40.377-08:002012-02-16T01:43:40.377-08:00David,
That was really very good indeed. I particu...David,<br />That was really very good indeed. I particularly liked the ping of the ball against the fence. It did that time travel thing and dropped me right into the shoes of the character. Really very good.<br />PhilipPhilip Doddhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13164671362164285231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3320437584368456903.post-79628179673246068122012-02-12T01:56:38.190-08:002012-02-12T01:56:38.190-08:00Thanks Chantel-I really appreciate your comments. ...Thanks Chantel-I really appreciate your comments. DavidND Mitchellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16510971525209549921noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3320437584368456903.post-1452985795444452552012-02-11T07:03:18.370-08:002012-02-11T07:03:18.370-08:00"An arm grabbed for Mark..." I think I ..."An arm grabbed for Mark..." I think I stopped breathing at that line. Delicious.Chantelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10324845550553743658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3320437584368456903.post-19531922686964038502012-02-10T05:40:51.051-08:002012-02-10T05:40:51.051-08:00Steven, Thanks for popping by and taking the time ...Steven, Thanks for popping by and taking the time to read this. Glad you enjoyed it. (At least I think you did) :)<br />DavidND Mitchellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16510971525209549921noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3320437584368456903.post-51001418925709847372012-02-09T12:44:34.809-08:002012-02-09T12:44:34.809-08:00Thanks Sharon. It's always nice to hear what y...Thanks Sharon. It's always nice to hear what you thought. Being new to this blogging game, your feedback is very welcome.<br />Thanks again,<br />DavidND Mitchellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16510971525209549921noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3320437584368456903.post-91404929575437123202012-02-08T18:20:54.874-08:002012-02-08T18:20:54.874-08:00whoa!!! i couldn't breathe . . . whoa dude!!! ...whoa!!! i couldn't breathe . . . whoa dude!!! stevenstevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3320437584368456903.post-63292567942351615842012-02-05T11:57:23.078-08:002012-02-05T11:57:23.078-08:00Menacing and haunting, I really enjoyed this.Menacing and haunting, I really enjoyed this.Sharon Longworthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18120227975152565893noreply@blogger.com