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Saturday 21 July 2012

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cup of tea at twelve
planets turn around the sun
small boy smiles and waves
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15 comments:

  1. carol l mckenna21 July 2012 at 06:39

    ah sacred in the ordinary ~ love line...small boy smiles and waves ~~ thanks, ^_^ (A Creative Harbor)

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  2. Grace21 July 2012 at 06:55

    I like the examples of the everyday, yet treasured moments ~

    Wonderful haiku ~

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  3. Maude Lynn21 July 2012 at 07:22

    I really like this!

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  4. Chantel21 July 2012 at 07:24

    Those are the moments that I love. Beauty in such simplicity...when you wonder if the world had paused.

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  5. Amrit Sinha21 July 2012 at 07:50

    The normal stuffs have been captured so brilliantly ... keep it up :-)

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  6. Magical Mystical Teacher21 July 2012 at 08:32

    You see, you feel, you write! Lovely!

    Meaning in Shadows

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  7. Chèvrefeuille21 July 2012 at 11:04

    In all his beauty this haiku is so ... deep and touchy. Thank you for sharing this.

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  8. Bruce Miller21 July 2012 at 11:18

    From the sublime to the sublimest we climb the stairs of your haiku!

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  9. joanne21 July 2012 at 11:59

    you've made the mundane sound so lovely

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  10. Catch My Words23 July 2012 at 06:20

    Is he waving at the planets as they spin or Mum having the tea? Well done! Thanks for your visit.

    http://joycelansky.blogspot.com

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  11. Brian Miller24 July 2012 at 06:28

    def get the sacred in the ordinary with this...

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  12. Kathy Reed24 July 2012 at 21:51

    Lucky for me to have found this site..finding great poetry like yours;)

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  13. *Dark Angel*25 July 2012 at 12:03

    Tea is always good! a simple and nice haiku, planets turn around the sun...loved this line :)

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  14. Vinay Leo R.26 July 2012 at 03:02

    Ordinary events have more meaning than we care to see.. Like the direction in the haiku. Cheers.

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  15. Cassiopeia Rises26 July 2012 at 08:13

    Beautiful and simple. Well done.


    Melanie

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