Fresh accordian lungs
Every breath Sarayu sends
Saves me from myself.
Haiku Heights #206 Rescue
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I guess accordian should be three :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks. I'll go with that!
DeleteJust sing, and don't count the syllables!
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Taken your advice and removed that question! Thanks!
Deleteaccordian lungs...very cool...and the fresh breath in this...that is very nice...smiles..
ReplyDeleteAccordian lungs ... I like that.
ReplyDeleteThanks :)
DeleteI too like the image of "accordian lungs". I just wonder what the heart is - a drum set?
ReplyDeleteIt could well be :)
DeleteExcellent!
ReplyDelete....an old word...an whole new meaning ..nice haiku;)
ReplyDeleteThanks kkkkaty :-)
ReplyDeletedoes the Sarayu refer to the river, the actress, or numerology? I like the sound of the words, but wish I had a clue....
ReplyDeleteHi Joanne. Thanks for asking. It's neither of those actually. I use it in the same sense as author Wm. Paul Young in his novel "The Shack". He uses the word in a non-traditional sense to stand for God's Spirit. I like that usage although some may not :)
DeleteSaving me from myself, when questions stare we hid behind ourselves. Nice haiku!
ReplyDeleteLord’s Play
Thanks for those kind words :)
DeleteA very lovely senryu ~ I like the accordian lungs ~
ReplyDeleteThanks Grace! I thought this was a senryu- thanks for confirming that!
DeleteSuccinct yet powerful...
ReplyDeleteCheers :)
Deleteaccordian lungs...way cool....and the breath saving you from yourself...nice..
ReplyDeleteThanks :)
Deleteoh yes.
ReplyDeletebreathing in deeply
this simple gift
from heaven:)
much thanks,
Jennifer
Indeed-got to appreciate the gift :)
DeleteBeautiful... Whoever Sarayu is. I love it.
ReplyDeleteEliz
Thanks for visiting :) In answer to your question see the reply to joanne above :)
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