chopped and carved down
roughened up,
no sign of sanding,
brought together:
larger, smaller
planks positioned
in a joust to join in joists
at right angles,
to passing angels,
be
hammered to the soil
through hardened Roman hands.
on a driftwood tree,
you died,
(two thousand times since round the sun
the epicentre circles from a growing oak still ripple)
your fallen branches,
stained and etched in blood,
you hung for me,
i live to tell the tale.
Posted for dverse: Poetics-On the Other Hand
Photo: Jim Rants |
mmm powerful...dead to life...
ReplyDeletecut down they might serve the a better purpose
one that resonates into today.
i like the alliteration there in the middle with joists
An important message in your words!
ReplyDeleteThis is such a beautiful poem - lovely.
ReplyDeleteYour words are incredibly powerful ... Beautiful poem!!
ReplyDeletewell said
ReplyDeleteThis is so well written the word sings with your strong messages
ReplyDeletevery powerful. i love how beautifully it reads.
ReplyDeleteFantastic poem, the power of love and grace over sweat and work. This is quite beautiful and so excellent.
ReplyDeleteSuch perfect reading on this Sunday morning... thanks!
ReplyDeletepowerful and perfect!
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