I guess accordian should be three :-)
Thanks. I'll go with that!
Just sing, and don't count the syllables!New Haiku: None to Rescue
Taken your advice and removed that question! Thanks!
accordian lungs...very cool...and the fresh breath in this...that is very nice...smiles..
Accordian lungs ... I like that.
I too like the image of "accordian lungs". I just wonder what the heart is - a drum set?
It could well be :)
....an old word...an whole new meaning ..nice haiku;)
Thanks kkkkaty :-)
does the Sarayu refer to the river, the actress, or numerology? I like the sound of the words, but wish I had a clue....
Hi Joanne. Thanks for asking. It's neither of those actually. I use it in the same sense as author Wm. Paul Young in his novel "The Shack". He uses the word in a non-traditional sense to stand for God's Spirit. I like that usage although some may not :)
Saving me from myself, when questions stare we hid behind ourselves. Nice haiku!Lord’s Play
Thanks for those kind words :)
A very lovely senryu ~ I like the accordian lungs ~
Thanks Grace! I thought this was a senryu- thanks for confirming that!
Succinct yet powerful...
accordian lungs...way cool....and the breath saving you from yourself...nice..
oh yes.breathing in deeplythis simple giftfrom heaven:)much thanks,Jennifer
Indeed-got to appreciate the gift :)
Beautiful... Whoever Sarayu is. I love it.Eliz
Thanks for visiting :) In answer to your question see the reply to joanne above :)
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