Saturday, 26 January 2013

Rescue

Fresh accordian lungs
Every breath Sarayu sends
Saves me from myself.


Haiku Heights #206 Rescue

28 comments:

  1. I guess accordian should be three :-)

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    1. Taken your advice and removed that question! Thanks!

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  3. accordian lungs...very cool...and the fresh breath in this...that is very nice...smiles..

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  4. Accordian lungs ... I like that.

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  5. I too like the image of "accordian lungs". I just wonder what the heart is - a drum set?

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  6. ....an old word...an whole new meaning ..nice haiku;)

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  7. does the Sarayu refer to the river, the actress, or numerology? I like the sound of the words, but wish I had a clue....

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    1. Hi Joanne. Thanks for asking. It's neither of those actually. I use it in the same sense as author Wm. Paul Young in his novel "The Shack". He uses the word in a non-traditional sense to stand for God's Spirit. I like that usage although some may not :)

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  8. Saving me from myself, when questions stare we hid behind ourselves. Nice haiku!

    Lord’s Play

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  9. A very lovely senryu ~ I like the accordian lungs ~

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    1. Thanks Grace! I thought this was a senryu- thanks for confirming that!

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  10. accordian lungs...way cool....and the breath saving you from yourself...nice..

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  11. oh yes.
    breathing in deeply
    this simple gift
    from heaven:)
    much thanks,
    Jennifer

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    1. Indeed-got to appreciate the gift :)

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  12. Beautiful... Whoever Sarayu is. I love it.
    Eliz

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    1. Thanks for visiting :) In answer to your question see the reply to joanne above :)

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