you
went
for it
from the off:
expanding bright light
carving out canyons, star throwing,
infinite intimate etching hearts on lovers' trees,
calling seas, collecting tears in brimming bottles, writing up a space invasion plan....
This is a Fibonacci Poem* in response to todays Poets United prompt. Learn more about this structure here
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waiting for the perfect tidal wave: a soul tsunami knuckle whitening cataclysmic change. waiting to inhabit second earth: send out sat...
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Dogs like us... Ain't got no family trust, Lyin' around this ol' bunk shed With nothin left but to be led. They's saying...
I really like this because it is playfully reverent.
ReplyDeleteI echo this comment!
DeleteOh! This is so romantic and alluring. You responded with alacrity. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this. You started out and then built the theme to a wonderful crescendo....and you now have me thinking of space invasion plans. Ha.
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful!!
ReplyDeleteI love carving out canyons, star throwing. There is a lot here that is left unsaid, excellent
ReplyDeleteWow... this is great!
ReplyDeleteinfinite intimate etching hearts on lovers' trees,
ReplyDeletecalling seas, collecting tears in brimming bottles, writing up a space invasion plan...love those last two lines...so much packed in there.....the infinite intimate one just rips off the tongue....and the playfulness of the last is cool....
A Valentine's poem, enchantement, abasement, revenge. Beautifully descriptive.
ReplyDeletewonderful!! building it line by line just like the sequence!
ReplyDeletewonderful!! building it line by line just like the sequence!
ReplyDeleteI like the snappy words, the build up is terrific ~
ReplyDeleteAn interesting form...I must try it one time ~