Saturday, 23 June 2012

Interconnect.

Ice dystopia
Next in line for leaving home
Thawed heart if you speak.
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Exhale winter through
Raindrop drumming on your mind
Carry on, dig deep.
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One life left to leave
No one misses seeds you sow
Never for nothing.
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Estimate your worth
Chasms cannot close themselves
Take your time my friend.


  
    







Posted at Haiku Heights prompt: support
and on Poets United.

24 comments:

  1. I think we all need support to thaw our iced hearts and heal ourselves through time ~

    Nice to see you at HH ~

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  2. deep and thought-provoking ..... don't know why, but I felt a bit of fear...

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    1. Thanks for visiting Joanne. This poem partly came out of hearing about someone who had taken their own life. I wanted to highlight everyone's need of support and that you should seek support if you need it...

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  3. Can't be expressed any better than this. Great haiku, Mitchell!

    Hank

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    1. Thanks Hank! Very kind of you to say so.

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  4. Very interesting set... esp the third one!
    Quest of the unknown.

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    1. Thank you for taking the time to read these Pranita.

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  5. Last two haiku are really "wow", did spark our thoughts :)

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    1. Cheers Jaideep. Very kind words :)

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  6. It's really a thoughtful one indeed!

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    1. I appreciate your words and thanks for visiting!

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  7. Sad words, yet it is about making that important connection, just in time.

    Eileen

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  8. take the plunge, into the deep end, learn to swim.

    good job.

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  9. nice...i really like the second and the last ones....the last one is a bit playful...smiles...and warm to thaw the ice...

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  10. Ah, estimating one's worth! Hard to do, undoubtedly. Probably depends on how a person feels about himself/herself on any given day!

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    1. I agree Mary, but it's worth remembering how important you are to those you around you even when you don't feel important!

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  11. Self worth is more important than one's considered value to others...that is just a bonus.If one is judged on the assessment of others, then a lot of us would be worth nothing.

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    1. Most certainly true. Thanks for stopping by :)

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