ah sacred in the ordinary ~ love line...small boy smiles and waves ~~ thanks, ^_^ (A Creative Harbor)
I like the examples of the everyday, yet treasured moments ~Wonderful haiku ~
I really like this!
Those are the moments that I love. Beauty in such simplicity...when you wonder if the world had paused.
The normal stuffs have been captured so brilliantly ... keep it up :-)
You see, you feel, you write! Lovely!Meaning in Shadows
In all his beauty this haiku is so ... deep and touchy. Thank you for sharing this.
From the sublime to the sublimest we climb the stairs of your haiku!
you've made the mundane sound so lovely
Is he waving at the planets as they spin or Mum having the tea? Well done! Thanks for your visit.http://joycelansky.blogspot.com
def get the sacred in the ordinary with this...
Lucky for me to have found this site..finding great poetry like yours;)
Tea is always good! a simple and nice haiku, planets turn around the sun...loved this line :)
Ordinary events have more meaning than we care to see.. Like the direction in the haiku. Cheers.
I prefer tea to coffee. :) Lovely haiku, great imagery. Happy feelings here :)
Beautiful and simple. Well done.Melanie
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