Saturday, 21 July 2012

meaning

cup of tea at twelve
planets turn around the sun
small boy smiles and waves


for: haiku heights 154 meaning

16 comments:

  1. ah sacred in the ordinary ~ love line...small boy smiles and waves ~~ thanks, ^_^ (A Creative Harbor)

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  2. I like the examples of the everyday, yet treasured moments ~

    Wonderful haiku ~

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  3. Those are the moments that I love. Beauty in such simplicity...when you wonder if the world had paused.

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  4. The normal stuffs have been captured so brilliantly ... keep it up :-)

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  5. In all his beauty this haiku is so ... deep and touchy. Thank you for sharing this.

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  6. From the sublime to the sublimest we climb the stairs of your haiku!

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  7. you've made the mundane sound so lovely

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  8. Is he waving at the planets as they spin or Mum having the tea? Well done! Thanks for your visit.

    http://joycelansky.blogspot.com

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  9. def get the sacred in the ordinary with this...

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  10. Lucky for me to have found this site..finding great poetry like yours;)

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  11. Tea is always good! a simple and nice haiku, planets turn around the sun...loved this line :)

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  12. Ordinary events have more meaning than we care to see.. Like the direction in the haiku. Cheers.

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  13. I prefer tea to coffee. :) Lovely haiku, great imagery. Happy feelings here :)

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  14. Beautiful and simple. Well done.


    Melanie

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