Sunday, 15 July 2012

first cycle

pedals turn small feet
mother frees and grips air as
he rides off her hands



Posted for Haiku Heights #153 "First"

7 comments:

  1. Nice capture of that first ride ~ Well done ~

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  2. smiles. a beautiful moment captured...and one of fear and excitement as well...as we let them go...

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  3. Very sweet. We all do remember our first ride

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  4. You captured JUST what it is like for a child to ride on his own for the very first time....

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  5. Image just ran in my mind. and the multiple interpretations are beautiful here!

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