Sunday 15 July 2012

first cycle

pedals turn small feet
mother frees and grips air as
he rides off her hands



Posted for Haiku Heights #153 "First"

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7 comments:

  1. Amrit Sinha16 July 2012 at 01:35

    Sweet and loving !!!

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  2. Grace16 July 2012 at 17:57

    Nice capture of that first ride ~ Well done ~

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  3. sm17 July 2012 at 06:59

    beautiful

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  4. Brian Miller17 July 2012 at 10:07

    smiles. a beautiful moment captured...and one of fear and excitement as well...as we let them go...

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  5. Unknown17 July 2012 at 13:23

    Very sweet. We all do remember our first ride

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  6. Mary18 July 2012 at 07:39

    You captured JUST what it is like for a child to ride on his own for the very first time....

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  7. Jaideep Rao18 July 2012 at 23:21

    Image just ran in my mind. and the multiple interpretations are beautiful here!

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